I think you did a good job in your manner of presentation. It was smooth and it seems that you spent time rehearsing your pitch. Although you did end your pitch with a question regarding profit, I would try to instead incorporate that into your pitch to try to persuade people to join your platform.
Bryce, I was really impressed by your presentation. The quality of the video heightened your credibility, and the fact that you were dressed nicely and had an aesthetic background helped your case as well. You had an effective hook because that fact that so much food goes to waste is shocking. All around I was bought into your idea and thought you nailed it.
I think you did a good job in your manner of presentation. It was smooth and it seems that you spent time rehearsing your pitch. Although you did end your pitch with a question regarding profit, I would try to instead incorporate that into your pitch to try to persuade people to join your platform.
ReplyDeleteBryce, I was really impressed by your presentation. The quality of the video heightened your credibility, and the fact that you were dressed nicely and had an aesthetic background helped your case as well. You had an effective hook because that fact that so much food goes to waste is shocking. All around I was bought into your idea and thought you nailed it.
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