Thursday, November 7, 2019

Elevator Pitch 3 Elevator 22A

The feedback I got from the last one was all over all very positive. The main feedback I got liked the additional part about revenue. I made sure to include the same revenue ideas and tried to improve on the overall quality of the post. I found that the feedback from the last post helped me to feel more confident in the pitch.
I found that I was much more comfortable in my second and third and elevator pitches. Having it memorized completely definitely helped as well as being more comfortable talking in the camera. I think that completing the elevator pitch assignments were very beneficial to me. 

1 comment:

  1. Hey Bryce! It's easy to see how much more comfortable you've become from your first elevator pitch. Your transitions flow smoothly and you've incorporated everything I would want to hear as an investor. I think that going into further detail about the revenue and profits of your idea was a great thing to do. Not only does it explicitly clarify how you're going to make money off of this idea, but also it gives investors the confidence they need to invest. Excellent job!

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