The only feedback I received from my last elevator pitch was to include some ideas about how to create revenue to be self sustaining as well as changing my question away from asking how to create revenue. I did both of these thing and I think it helped make for a more complete elevator pitch. I included ideas for selling advertisements and boosted posts for requesting goods, as well as changing the question to a call for action for everyone to help.
Hello Bryce, I like your new changes to your last pitch. You did well in incorporating your ideas on how to create revenue and making your pitch more attractive potential. I do think advertisements and online posts are a good way for entrepreneurs to get started, although the latter seems a much cheaper method. Great job!
Hey Bryce! I really enjoyed listening to your pitch and seeing how much more comfortable you look compared to your first pitch. You carry a lot of enthusiasm in your tone, and the outfit and setting really added a lot to your presentation. I think the advertisements is the way to go in terms of making a profit, and I also think that you including the "requests" made by nonprofits to allow them to tell others on the app what they need specifically. A lot of people are willing to help, but work better when they have a list and instructions. Great job!
I really enjoyed your pitch. You look much more comfortable compared to your first pitch. I can really tell that you capitalized on the criticisms that people made on your first video. This is a great quality to have as an entrepreneur, as understanding that you made a mistake and fixing it is what will make your business idea eventually successful through hard work and perseverance.
Hello Bryce,
ReplyDeleteI like your new changes to your last pitch. You did well in incorporating your ideas on how to create revenue and making your pitch more attractive potential. I do think advertisements and online posts are a good way for entrepreneurs to get started, although the latter seems a much cheaper method. Great job!
Hey Bryce!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to your pitch and seeing how much more comfortable you look compared to your first pitch. You carry a lot of enthusiasm in your tone, and the outfit and setting really added a lot to your presentation. I think the advertisements is the way to go in terms of making a profit, and I also think that you including the "requests" made by nonprofits to allow them to tell others on the app what they need specifically. A lot of people are willing to help, but work better when they have a list and instructions. Great job!
Hi Bryce,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your pitch. You look much more comfortable compared to your first pitch. I can really tell that you capitalized on the criticisms that people made on your first video. This is a great quality to have as an entrepreneur, as understanding that you made a mistake and fixing it is what will make your business idea eventually successful through hard work and perseverance.